About
Writing
by: Michael LaRocca
In this course, I'll tell you everything I know about improving
your writing, publishing it electronically and in print, and promoting
it after the sale.
Two questions you should ask:
(1) What will it cost me?
(2) What does this Michael LaRocca guy know about it?
Answer #1 -- It won't cost you a thing. The single
most important bit of advice I can give you, and I say it often,
is don't pay for publication.
My successes have come from investing time. Some of it was well
spent, but most of it was wasted. It costs me nothing to share what
I've learned. It costs you nothing to read it except some of your
time.
Answer #2 -- "Michael LaRocca has been researching
the publishing field for over ten years."
This quote, from an ezine (electronic newsletter) called Authors
Wordsmith, was a kind way of saying I've received a lot of rejections.
Also, my "research" required 20 years.
But in my "breakout" year (2000), I finished writing
four books and scheduled them all for publication in 2001. Then
I spent almost a year as an editor and Author Development Specialist
for one of my publishers.
After my first book was published, both my publishers closed. Two
weeks and three publishers later, I was back on track. All four
books were republished, and a fifth will be released in 2004. Written
in 2003, no rejections.
See how much faster it was the second time around? That's because
I learned a lot.
2004 EPPIE Award finalist. 2002 EPPIE Award finalist. Listed by
Writers Digest as one of The Best 101 Websites For Writers in 2001
and 2002. Sime-Gen Readers Choice Awards for Favorite Author (Nonfiction
& Writing) and Favorite Book (Nonfiction & Writing). 1982
Who's Who In American Writing.
Excuse me for bragging, but it beats having you think I'm unqualified.
Also, I found more editing jobs. That's what I do when I'm not
writing, doing legal transcription, or teaching English in China
(my new home). But the thing is, if I'd become an editor before
learning how to write, I'd have stunk.
I'll tell you what's missing from this course. What to write about,
where I get my ideas from, stuff like that. Maybe I don't answer
this question because I think you should do it your way, not mine.
Or maybe because I don't know how I do it. Or maybe both.
Once you've done your writing bit, this course will help you with
all the other stuff involved in being a writer. Writing involves
wearing at least four different hats. Writer, editor, publication
seeker, post-sale self-promoter.
Here's what I can tell you about my writing.
Sometimes a story idea just comes to me out of nowhere and refuses
to leave me alone until I write it. So, I do.
And, whenever I read a book that really fires me up, I find myself
thinking, "I wish I could write like that." So, I just
keep trying. I'll never write the best, but I'll always write my
best. And get better every time. That's the "secret" of
the writing "business," same as any other business. Always
deliver the goods.
I read voraciously, a habit I recommend to any author who doesn't
already have it. You'll subconsciously pick up on what does and
doesn't work. Characterization, dialogue, pacing, plot, story, setting,
description, etc. But more importantly, someone who doesn't enjoy
reading will never write something that someone else will enjoy
reading.
I don't write "for the market." I know I can't, so I
just write for me and then try to find readers who like what I like.
I'm not trying to whip up the next bestseller and get rich. Not
that I'd complain. Nope, I have to write what's in my heart, then
go find a market later. It makes marketing a challenge at times,
but I wouldn't have it any other way.
When you write, be a dreamer. Go nuts. Know that you're writing
pure gold. That fire is why we write.
An author who I truly admire, Kurt Vonnegut, sweats out each individual
sentence. He writes it, rewrites it, and doesn't leave it alone
until it's perfect. Then when he's done, he's done.
I doubt most of write like that. I don't. I let it fly as fast
as my fingers can move across the paper or keyboard, rushing to
capture my ideas before they get away. Later, I change and shuffle
and slice.
James Michener claims that he writes the last sentence first, then
has his goal before him as he writes his way to it.
Then there's me. No outline whatsoever. I create characters and
conflict, spending days and weeks on that task, until the first
chapter really leaves me wondering "How will this end?"
Then my characters take over, and I'm as surprised as the reader
when I finish my story.
Some authors set aside a certain number of hours every day for
writing, or a certain number of words. In short, a writing schedule.
Then there's me. No writing for three or six months, then a flurry
of activity where I forget to eat, sleep, bathe, change the cat's
litter... I'm a walking stereotype. To assuage the guilt, I tell
myself that my unconscious is hard at work. As Hemingway would say,
long periods of thinking and short periods of writing.
I've shown you the extremes in writing styles. I think most authors
fall in the middle somewhere. But my point is, find out what works
for you. You can read about how other writers do it, and if that
works for you, great. But in the end, find your own way. That's
what writers do.
Just don't do it halfway.
If you're doing what I do, writing a story that entertains and
moves you, then you will find readers who share your tastes. For
some of us that means a niche market and for others it means regular
appearances on the bestseller list.
Writing is a calling, but publishing is a business. Remember that
AFTER you've written your manuscript. Not during.
I've told you how I write. For me.
The next step is self-editing. Fixing all the mistakes I made,
that I can identify, in my rush to write it before my Muse took
a holiday. Several rewrites. Running through it repeatedly with
a fine-toothed comb.
Then what?
There are stories that get rejected because the potential publisher
hates them, but far more are shot down for other reasons. Stilted
dialogue. Boring descriptions. Weak characters. Underdeveloped story.
Unbelievable or inconsistent plot. Sloppy writing.
That's what you have to fix.
After my fifteen-year hiatus from writing, I started by using Free
Online Creative Writing Workshops. What I needed most was input
from strangers. After all, once you're published, your readers will
be strangers. Every publisher you submit to will be a stranger.
What will they think? I was far too close to my writing to answer
that.
Whenever I got some advice, I considered it. Some I just threw
out as wrong, or because I couldn't make the changes without abandoning
part of what made the story special to me. Some I embraced. But
the point is, I decided. It was my writing.
After a time, I didn't feel the need for the workshops anymore.
I'm fortunate enough to have a wife whose advice I will always treasure,
and after a while that was all I needed. But early on, it would've
been unfair to ask her to read my drivel. (Not that I didn't anyway.)
I don't know how far along you are in your writing, but if you've
never used a workshop, I keep a list of them at http://freereads.topcities.com/creativewritingonline.html.
Your goal when you self-edit is to get your book as close to "ready
to read" as you possibly can. You want your editor to find
what you overlooked, not what you didn't know about.
To that end, I offer two resources.
http://freereads.topcities.com/usefullinksforauthors.html
contains links to online quotations, grammar and style guides, dictionaries,
encyclopedias, thesauruses, scam warnings, writer groups, copyright
stuff, etc.
http://freereads.topcities.com/commonwritingmistakes.html
contains a list of the most common mistakes I've seen in my years
as an editor. I still reread it from time to time just so I don't
forget.
Your story is your story. You write it from your heart, and when
it looks like something you'd enjoy reading, you set out to find
a publisher who shares your tastes. What you don't want is for that
first reader to lose sight of what makes your story special because
you've bogged it down with silly mistakes.
Authors don't pay to be published. They are paid for publication.
Always. It's just that simple. And later, I'll tell you where to
get some free editing.
But there's a limit to how much editing you can get without paying
for it. Do you need more than that? I don't know because I've never
seen your writing. But if you evaluate it honestly, I Think you'll
know the answer.
As an editor, I've worked with some authors who simply couldn't
self-edit. A non-native English speaker, a guy who slept through
English class, whatever. To them, maybe paying for editing was an
option. This isn't paying for publication. This is paying for a
service, training. Just like paying to take a Creative Writing class
at the local community college.
By the way, I don't believe creativity can be taught. Writing,
certainly. I took my Creative Writing class in high school, free,
and treasure it. But I already had the creativity, or else it would've
been a waste of the teacher's time and mine.
If you hire an editor worthy of the name, you should learn from
that editor how to self-edit in the future. In my case it took two
tries, because the first editor was a rip-off artist charging over
ten times market value for incomplete advice.
That editor, incidentally, is named Edit Ink, and they're listed
on many of the "scam warning" sites mentioned at Useful
Links For Authors. They took kickbacks from every fake agent who
sent them a client. (I'll talk about fake agents later.)
If you choose to hire an editor, check price and reputation. And
consider that you might never make enough selling your books to
get back what you pay that editor. Do you care? That's your decision.
The first, most important step on the road to publication is to
make your writing the best it can be. |